Untold love – [ Poetry Potluck week 38 ]

This poem that I’m going to write is inspired by a song from the movie ” JODHAA AKBAR ” – ” Jashn – E – Bahara “. It’s my most favorite songs and very touching. From the very music to lyrics to tune , the song just pulls you in. You won’t even know you went into a trance. It’s that beautiful! 🙂

 

In love he was with a beautiful girl,

Her thoughts just made his mind whirl.

Every time he saw her ,

He felt strangely enchanted.

Love was in the air,

Their lives had just started.

Day and night he used to await,

For her presence in his estate.

There was nothing he could do,

His focus was impossible.

Her beauty killed him,

In front of his eyes her picture would swim.

As they walked together,

Their silence broken by neither.

In awe he stared,

About her so much he cared.

His eyes kept searching,

So much for her he was yearning.

Even the moon hides behind the clouds,

Now not feeling so proud.

So much in love he was,

In her charm he was so lost.

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Categories: Emotions, Love | Tags: , , , , , | 3 Comments

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3 thoughts on “Untold love – [ Poetry Potluck week 38 ]

  1. Wonderful flow. My poem is about being used in a different way but all ways suck

  2. awwww I love when a man is entranced by a girl 🙂 cool!
    enjoy the potluck!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/06/07/along-came-hancock/

  3. i love this trance.. awweesome.. here is my song, Somebody’s me

    Someone is Special

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