Kite – Haiku #3

 

High up in the sky,

Soaring and gliding by,

My kite that i fly.

 


 

YES!!! I think this a PERFECT Haiku… ! πŸ˜€ What do u guys think? Bring in the comments soon, Eagerly waiting for them. πŸ™‚

 

Check out my other blog as well :

http://dancingfreak.wordpress.com/

 

Bye now.

 

~Harshika~

 

 

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5 thoughts on “Kite – Haiku #3

  1. Jingle

    love the kites…
    your post is timeless here…

  2. Really enjoyed both the photo and the haiku. One note: if you’re going for a true haiku you want one more syllable in the second line to make 7. Maybe something like “Soaring free and gliding high.” Only mentioned this because you asked. Hope you don’t mind. I love kite images!

  3. Short and Sweet
    Nice picture.

    • @francis : thank u so much πŸ™‚
      @live2write : oops!! 😦 eeeeeee πŸ˜€ thank u so much πŸ™‚ i guess ill leave it now.. for i want always remember this mistake.. ill keep the tip in mind. thanks a lot πŸ™‚

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