GO [ THURSDAY POETS RALLY WEEK 36]

When a challenge faced,

Don’t turn your face,

Just hit it head on and GO!

When running a race,

And slacking your pace,

Push yourself and say GO!

When time is less,

And everything’s a mess

Just keep saying GO!

When you lose your hope,

Though your goal is near,

Just think of the mantra GO!

When so much to do,

With no way to,

Just be determined and GO!

I know this is a lousy poem.. But i will update it quiet soon. This was the best that i could get out of me with the mess that was going on in my head. Hope you guys found it decent.

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43 thoughts on “GO [ THURSDAY POETS RALLY WEEK 36]

  1. Very optimistic and inspiring…
    I would definitely try.. ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. This is my fav part : When a challenge faced, Donโ€™t turn your face, Just hit it head on and GO!

    Think positive, always!!

  3. sometimes we need this mantra desperately- fab poem harshika.

  4. Wow! A cheerful, motivating poem. Well done and how wonderful to place in Rally as we move into the new year. So appropriate. Thank you!

    Jamie

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  7. Jingle

    your poetry is getting better and funnier…
    Thanks.
    have fun.

  8. I think anytime someone is brave enough to write a poem and post it — it says a lot! Your poem is great!

  9. Someone is Special

    Inspiring Poem.. What a Go man.. Here is mine, ! Wishes !

    Happy Rally !

    Wish you a very Happy New Year 2011..

    –Someone is Special–

  10. Yes,Go….optimistic outlook

  11. Linda

    After just going through the hardest 15 months of my life, your poem really hit home. When I had nothing left, I had to just keeping GOing. Nicely done.

  12. now thats an inspiring one ๐Ÿ˜€
    loved the first stanza ๐Ÿ˜€

  13. There is a simplicity that inspires in your repitition of “Go”.

    And… it’s great advice too!

  14. Delightful! I enjoyed this a lot!

  15. Great message and perfect for a new beginning. Happy New Year.
    Victoria

    my rally: http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/darkness-is-only-a-degree-of-light/

  16. gracefulglider

    Go go!! *chanting*
    It’s writing like these that inspire. I love how you used one word in different situations. keep up.

    Lovely 2011

  17. Sam373

    “…I know this is a lousy poem…” ? I don’t agree! This was great! Now I must GO!

  18. I am always happy to read upbeat, positive poetry! This is a mantra. Thanks!

    Happy New Year!

  19. I enjoyed this poem, a poem with a moral, especially a true one is always the better for the moral. Even though you say it is poor, it is still better than my best.
    The Lonely Recluse.

  20. Just go, let your words flow! Inspirational.

    • @dan : thank u ๐Ÿ™‚
      @trish, jamie and tastithoughts : thanks ๐Ÿ™‚
      @ji : really?? :O thanks a lot ๐Ÿ™‚
      @Someisspecial : THanks ๐Ÿ™‚ wish u the same ๐Ÿ™‚
      @athursdaychild: thanks a lot ๐Ÿ™‚
      @uma : yes it is ๐Ÿ™‚
      @Linda : U have everything girl.. be strong.. hope u alright ๐Ÿ™‚
      @raji and anita : thanks ๐Ÿ™‚
      @louise : ๐Ÿ™‚
      @thoughtsnotlost &live2write : thanks so much ๐Ÿ™‚
      @glider : chant chant ๐Ÿ˜›

  21. I liked each and every word of the poem and since I happened to visit the site on first January, it isa nice inspiration.
    Thanks for sharing, drop in to my blog and wish you a very happy and prosperous new year.

    • @madan : thank u so much ๐Ÿ™‚ wish u the same
      @recluse : thank u so much ๐Ÿ™‚
      @RJ : Yes it is ๐Ÿ˜€ wish u the same =)
      @Sam : Lol.. thanks a lot ๐Ÿ™‚

  22. Go is the word! Keep going! Happy new year:)

  23. who said its lousy? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ they need to get their eyes checked I guess ๐Ÿ˜‰

    very beautiful and inspiring is the poem, Dancingfreak ๐Ÿ™‚ Happy New Year & Rally Week 36 ๐Ÿ™‚

    Why The Hesitation? My Poetry For Rally Week 36

  24. This was actually good. I love simple poems with a great message.

    I like it!

  25. I can’t remember the last time I wrote something that felt finished when I pressed Post. You clearly are following your own advice, and just saying, GO! ;~) I’ll be thinking of this on my next run.

  26. Happy new year friend!
    ab kya bolun ๐Ÿ˜€
    U GO GAL ๐Ÿ˜€

  27. “When time is less,
    And everythingโ€™s a mess
    Just keep saying GO!” that’s the spirit. ๐Ÿ™‚
    simple and nice! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  29. lousy? this to me is very motivational. lovely! mine for this thursday- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/14/hunger/

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