The mountain peaks so way up high,
The sandy beaches by the sea side.
The snow covered such a divine sight,
The salty waves crashing with their might.
The little rocks breaking at a touch,
The sand sinks where our footprints we left.
The majestic beauty cannot be dared,
The sound of the blue cannot be compared.
The mountain peaks so way up high,
The sandy beaches by the sea side.
beautiful poem about the beach,
love it.
you are so very thoughtful and sweet…
have fun today!
visit a few poets from our list,
that’s how you get more feedback.
@ji : will do. wow really? thanks 🙂
if nobody visits anybody, then how do you get comments?
everyone shall visit a few poets…
otherwise, it is boring…
I had a difficult time reading the red font against the background, but when I did like what I read. I like the repetiion.
@talon : wil consider ur difficulty and not repeat 🙂
and thanks 🙂
Hi Harshika.. this is nice.. the alternating lines interspersed between beach and mountain gives it nice effect..! 🙂 Lovely Potluck!
Mine is here: Morning Mist. Do visit if you can 🙂
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/16/happy-birthday-wishes-to-talon/
help visit Talon to wish her a happy birthday today,
Thanks!