Rain…. :) [Thursday poets rally week 27]

The clouded sky ,

The rolling thunder,

Gave me a sure sign.

The blinding flash,

Of the lightening bolt,

Refused to deny.

It’s monsoon time ,

Those gentle drops,

Pitter-pattering on the panes.

The howling wind,

Gushing thro’ the window,

Brings me the smell of rain.

I look outside,

With big broad smile,

My face lit up with joy.

I breathed in deep,

And put out my hand,

To Β enjoy the chill water drops.

It suddenly pours,

From drizzle to shower,

And i looked outside in awe.

I ran outside,

And stood in the lawn,

Welcoming the rains with open arms.

p.s. : sorry for the late post guys. I’ve been busy with my cousin’ s wedding and found time to post only now… HopeΒ enjoyedΒ the poem πŸ˜€

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62 thoughts on “Rain…. :) [Thursday poets rally week 27]

  1. Jessicas Japes

    A very apt poem considering what the monsoon rains have caused in Pakistan. Something so natural and beautiful can also bring devastation . Well written.

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  3. Drenchingly lovely rain poem. – Bill

  4. very profound piece,
    I feel the sound of the rain in your words…

    way to go,
    πŸ™‚

  5. Well done. Was very well written

  6. ah.. just ❀ that rain πŸ˜€ i hear it through ur words and through my window too.. πŸ™‚ good one.. searching now for the like button πŸ™‚

  7. I love this perfect celebration of finding joy in the rain πŸ™‚

  8. A delightful refreshing poem, Harshika…
    Rain is quite magical indeed!!! And i loved the warm welcome you gave it πŸ™‚

    Hope your cousin’s wedding has been FUN!!! πŸ™‚ Enjoy…

    • @kavi : you won’t believe the immense fun i had πŸ˜€ it was AWESOME!! πŸ˜€

      yes is magical πŸ™‚ thank u πŸ™‚

  9. I have loved this from beginning to end. A magical feeling my friend . Much love xx

  10. I love storms too! They are so refreshing!

    • @frayedges : storms are not refreshing… it’s a gentle rain that is refreshing.. wow fray… u have a unique taste πŸ™‚

  11. eeeeee πŸ˜€
    masttt πŸ˜€
    i sooooo love the rain πŸ˜€

  12. I wish this lovely enchantment would bring me some rain we could use it!

  13. I love the rain and this makes me want to go around stomping into puddles! Thank you for sharing πŸ™‚

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  15. Very nice. I could almost feel the rain and the earth welcoming it.

  16. 83October

    I love the rain. There’s something so refreshing about it, especially after a very hot week. This poem makes me want to do exactly that…go out and open my arms to the rain.

  17. I absolutely love the rain. Wonderful poem … brings it all back even in this little heat wave we have here where I live … Lovely poem … the photograph is great! Did you take it?

    Happy Rally days ….
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  18. I find the rain to comfort my pain. When I’m alone and the rain is outside howling like I am, it’s as if the sky is my companion. But sun showers are my favorite to run and dance in. Great tribute to rain.

  19. Dabir Dalton

    Great Poem! Oh how I love the rain on a hot summer day…

  20. mairmusic

    And I could feel the rain in your words– nicely done!
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  21. wow…. so beautifully written πŸ™‚

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  23. mother2rah

    The words cascade down the page with the rain. Thanks for sharing.

  24. I love the smell of rain…
    Your poem is so vivid… It is raining outside… its dark but still I luved reading it when it’s raining…

    keep versing
    viva la vida πŸ™‚

  25. just awesome, you have sent a breeze full of moist fragrance my way. loved the poem.

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  27. Dakshima

    feel like dancing in the rain..
    perfect…
    see me on http://loveamongotherthings.wordpress.com/
    cheers..

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  29. mangoesntangoes

    This is great, so descriptive and clear. Thank you for sharing.

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  31. I love rain.. beautiful poem πŸ™‚

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  33. Chloe

    This was a really enjoyable read my friend πŸ˜€ Thanks for sharing xx

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