This poem is dedicated to 2 of my CLOSEST friends , AJAY AND AMRU , ย who are leaving chennai for their college ๐Ÿ˜ฆ I will terribly miss them and so writing this poem… One is going to RAIPUR while the other is going to COIMBATORE ! ๐Ÿ˜ฆ ๐Ÿ˜ฆ I don’t know how this poem will turn out but this is what i feel………….. SO here goes…

The last two years of school was great,

With little fights and some treats to take.

Endlessย gossipsย and mall hangouts,

Hours over the phone , ย maybe through the night out ๐Ÿ˜›

Introducing new friends and getting introduced

A million misunderstands andย finallyย a truce.

Sharing secrets and lending your shoulder,

Your physically presence always makes me bolder.

When i look at you i never have to think,

I just pour my heart out to you in a blink.

When i see you i feel immense joy,

But when u leave i try not to cry.

But time has passed just so fast,

But i know our friendship will always last. ๐Ÿ™‚

Though miles apart nothing matters,

I’ll always remember the tight , ย warm hugs and kisses especially the latter.

It’s time to move on my sweet , lovely friend,

But i know this is not the end.

Your college will be a whole new world,

And now this is my final word….


I know you’ll be mine till the end.

I know I’m in your heart as you are in mine,

So bon voyage my friend ,

Nothing can change things between us….

Not even your new friends nor time! ๐Ÿ˜€

I’ll miss you a hell lot guys ๐Ÿ˜ฆ LOVE YOU TWO TO THE CORE!!! ๐Ÿ˜€ BON VOYAGE !!!! Have a safe trip and a BRIGHT BRIGHT future… ALL THE BEST ๐Ÿ™‚ *ย TIGHTESTย HUGS FOR BOTH OF YOU *

Hope all of you enjoyed reading. ๐Ÿ™‚

Until next time.. CIAO!!


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  1. u r such a lovely friend to all,
    beautiful colors,
    lovely words.

  2. That is so very very sweet!! What would the world be without friends. You are a wonderful friend xx

  3. Such a sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet poem!
    I am sure your friends will be touched with this poem… so was I !
    And they will love and remember you and vice versa for a long long time to come!

    I guess friendship is just.. well, it’s so simple, that it JUST IS! No definitions, no bounds, no rules apply… it just flows… just enjoy flowing along with it..

    Take care, and good lucjk to you as well your awesome friends! ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Your friends are sooo lucky to have such a special friend like you. Your poem is just amazing. Friendship is the best. I wish you all the very best. ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Just want to congratulate you on winning the award. You Rock! x

  6. Such a thoughtful post that makes me think of caring friendship. Have a great week!

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  8. he/she must be proud to read this ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. what a beautiufl send off to those that were very obviously dear to you…nice write.

  10. =) It is touching made me feel really touch about reading this wonderful poem, you are a great friend!:D

  11. A wonderful tribute to friendship, and a reminder of how special it is. Thanks -Bill

  12. so sweet………:):):)

  13. so sweet and such emotions for your friends it really shines through in your piece and i can actually see snippets of your friendship tossed in here like a montage!

  14. Loving tribute to your friends!

  15. friendships like this can last a lifetime and no space or time can ruin it. i have friends from way back in high school and we still have the same closeness until now, even decades later. great poem on friendship! =)

  16. oinky

    lovely lovely lovely! ๐Ÿ˜€

  17. Great ode to friendship. Parting is always sweet sorrow. Just think of the first time the three of you will be reunited, what great conversation will occur!

  18. Thoughtful , caring and tender, what a wonderful friend you are and to have such nice friends too.

    from thursdays rally

    two posts today one is for jingles rally

  19. When all to life is getting good grades, fights that last a class period, spending all day with someone to only go home and spend all night with them on the phone, friends are the most valuable asset of your life. Post high school, Post college, the friendships I developed outside of adult responsibilities are the ones that are the truest. You said it best, “When i look at you i never have to think,/ I just pour my heart out to you in a blink.” You did a beautiful job with this piece I am glad your friends enjoyed it!!

    • @splashofexpression : ur so right abt all that ๐Ÿ™‚ nothing can be like school ๐Ÿ˜€

      miss it badly ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

  20. Beautiful and heartfelt. Brought back memories of school for me, and those amazing friends. ๐Ÿ™‚

  21. a beautiful tribute for your friends..such a bittersweet moment!

  22. suzicate

    What a lovely tribute to your friends.

  23. A great tribute to your friends! awesome job! great touching lines!

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  24. its just too beautiful. the poem turned out to be as beautiful as you desired it to be. touching the very core of heart.

    hope your love survives forever and ever.

  25. anummunaf

    wow…… school day are the best part in everyones life……….. n i stilll i miss my best friend

  26. Happy Saturday!

  27. Desiree

    That’s so sweet of you! Beautiful poem!


    help say hello to a fellow poet if you have a moment,

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  30. thanks for the sweet comments,
    have a smiling day!

    Rally week 26 will be on August 12-18,

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  32. when are you coming back to the blogsphere?

  33. Oh my goodness. This is completely charming … i love it. Nice work.

    Thank you! ๐Ÿ™‚

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    how is everything, friend?
    It is Monday again, I sincerely invite you to join us for a Monday Poetry Potluck party, bring in 1 to 3 poem treats to share!
    You will have 60 hours enjoying the fun.
    Hurry up, the more you share, the happier we are.
    Hope to see you in our partyโ€ฆ.Last time to link in is Wednesday, 8am!

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