I stared up and saw,
A flock of birds flying round,
Zap! I was in awe.
stunning. love it
;0
good one happy potluck
my post was here http://blackswanpoetry.wordpress.com/2011/06/19/poem-smeared/
Awesome haiku its so vibrant
I love it – great imagery haikudoyou
@15 : thanks
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stunning.
love it
;0
good one happy potluck
my post was here
http://blackswanpoetry.wordpress.com/2011/06/19/poem-smeared/
Awesome haiku its so vibrant
I love it – great imagery
haikudoyou
@15 : thanks