Well.. what I’m going to write now is my version of a sonnet. My first sonnet was also my version as I’m not following the strict rhyme scheme and structure and the syllable stuff. But yes i will get on to writing perfect sonnet soon. This is my second sonnet. Enjoy it!! 
With a new dawn to look forward to,
A clear day to start out with,
My new journey i start now,
One step after another slow,
Awaiting those twists and turns that come and go,
The thrills and excitements life can bring,
Some surprises and fun join in and sing.
My journey on the road ahead,
May be long or soon come to an end,
My life plans i not yet know,
I just want to enjoy and be on the go,
But i sense the road ahead will be great,
Now i start my journey after a break,
My first step on the road ahead i take.
I love it.
Beautiful…
Wish you a wonderful journey ahead…
Wonderful picture…
enjoy as you walk the journey called life! here’s my new year potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/03/15/life/
@ji and fiveloaf : thank u both so much
Enjoy your first step…lovely poem
@uma and rashmi : thanks so much
love it,
kind of refreshing to me.
Thanks for sharing…
A++
And as you set forth on this wonderful journey, my best wishes are with you, my dear..
A lovely positive and BRIGHT sonnet!! Very sweet…
@kavi : thanks a lot
congrats on your perfect poet award wk 36 trisha! .. here’s mine for this thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/
@fiveloaf: i love her
awesomee!!! is the word…
i soooo loved this one
i’ve never tried a sonnet.. somehow ye mere pallle nai padta.. gotta try soemday
here from Jingle’s Rally.. You can find my poem at
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2011/01/12/i-dance/
@megzone : try karo.. u ll rock in it re…
thanks a lot
This is lovely, thank you